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''Untitled" by Richeyjames

If im to love my arts to suffer,
when im alone my canvas smothered.
So when i see her i dares't mention,
that contentment is the enemy of my invention.

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  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    March 22, 2008
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    this was good thanks for sharing and I hopet o read more from you soon.


  • Creatress silver member
    March 18, 2008

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    hmmmmmm, still pondering this. I don't really understand the first line but I did enjoy your words nonetheless.
    short and sweet.
    pen on poet,
    creatress


  • Veronica Leigh
    March 2, 2008
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    Good job. Thank you for entering!