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Girls and Boys

Only fools can’t lie
Only angels don’t die,
Fools could never touch the sky,
And angels know the reason why,
For if fools did they’d surely cry,
And knowing angels testify,
And the fools they will deny,
The Bloody, Bloody Truth,
Paradoxes do defy.

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Written November 28th, 2003

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  • cali951
    June 13, 2007
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    Nice poem but i think you should have added more to it like what either sex really does wrong


  • mystic oceania
    March 16, 2005
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    very well done! i loved this it is so amazing and wonddrful and the message is really clear keep up the great writing
    ~mystic


  • RuthArabellaTrasher
    November 28, 2003
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    Great

    Interesting. I enjoyed it! Bravo!