Way beyond love and desire,
burning deep within hells fire.
Challenged throughout space and time,
I openly take what I deem mine.
Wave upon wave of brutal slaughter,
after playing games of torture.
Beginning of course with vile screams,
lacerating tongues, a life long dream.
Arterial blood pumps and flows,
as I bath within its scarlet glow.
Seeing fear tremble inside their eyes,
craving agony and despair filled cries.
Tearing nails from comfy beds,
unheard pleas desperately beg.
The scalpel gives a guillotine grin,
smiling, I peel layers of skin.
Muscles contract in blistering pain,
flesh turns pale as life force drains.
Hysteria and timber tones,
departed now, there's no one home.
Entrails slither to the floor,
my pulse races, needing more.
Overwhelmed by a new desire,
to remove the eyes, set them on fire.
As I stare into deaths cavity,
I openly laugh at my depravity.
Gleefully singing songs as I go,
this continues to be one hell of a show!
Author notes
Prompt; Why are there serial killers or come up with your own!
This is a fictional character.
**NB Although I like reading and writing this theme, I DO NOT promote it in any way**
A contest entry
- Serial Killers by Tattboyspet.
425 points, ended March 6, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter All Your Dark Writes Here (Series - II) by xxRainbowDawnxx.
1500 points, ended March 27, 2008, 95 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oooh very dark indeed, but very nicely written here. I love the way you rhymed this, most dark writes are hard to write with rhyme, but you managed this one well.
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You have outdone the gruesome appeal here, but I have to say that the name 'Brutal Bruce' does not do this beast justice
thank you for your entry
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you did a very awesome job here visually describing gruesome and wincing details my fav line was: "The scalpel gives a guillotine grin" that was just a neat line and really gave a wicked spin to the stanza, good luck ma dear in the contest, may the most demented win!
mwahaha!
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Ehhhhhh Ok this is your style but still you write well in different just gotta trust your self. Good luck with this Probably win lol
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eeeeeh!!!!
that's nasty...BUT GOOD!!!!! awesome
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You really scare me sometimes Aweome and thrilling and gruesome indeed.Is there something you arent telling us. lol Good luck in the contest...
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One hell of a show indeed!!!
Another brilliant write.. and I really could see inside the mind of the killer... ewwwww... spooky and gruesome.
This flowed really well hunny and the rhyme was fab!!
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