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Home is...




Where -
masks fall into oblivion,
untainted joy colors welcoming smiles,
recipes always contain teaspoons of love,
everything begins, everything finds acceptance.

That, is my beginning.



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Home is where one starts from.
T. S. Eliot
25 words

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  • elemental angel
    March 12, 2008

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    Wonderful imagery and a wonderful take on the prompt.
    Bravo


  • surface--tension
    March 1, 2008

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    So true. You expressed this wonderfully with just a few lines. Home is relaxing, you can be yourself when you have nothing to worry about.

    Good job!