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Dragon-eyed



Embers whisper, from ebony depths of dragon soul;
Consummate power, in boiling veins raising stern commands.
Silence penetrates, bonding audience in reverie,
succumbing them, to absolute dominion.

They still walk the Earth, beneath burning eyes.

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5 lines, "Eyes of the dragon"

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  • Riftkin gold member
    March 2, 2008

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    I also believe that dragons walk this earth.
    They may not look like this any more,
    but their souls carry on.

    Riftkin


    • sunflowerpoet
      March 2, 2008
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      Sure, I believe that too. That was the spirit of the poem too Thanks for HM...


      Sunflower.