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Rare

Give it to me raw
Simple
With all the crackles
Even unexperienced
So long as it's from the heart
Untouched
Even if it's angry
Give it to me pissed off
Repetitive
Loud as fuck
I don't mind if it's on heroin
Cocaine
Or any other drug
So long as it plays
and plays and plays
Give it to me with power
Like it was in '79
When they sung about '69


Loud
Offensive
Like poisoned chocolate

Sweet
Addictive
Like rare steak laced with coke

Just give it to me

Author notes

a little ditty about 70's punk

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  • Chainsaw
    March 12, 2008
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    I especially liked "Like rare steak laced with coke".

    Nice tribute.