Been used and tossed aside from life
considered to be of no worth,
too old now for life's carousel
my value gone, my value gone.
There was a time I was loved well
when roses bloomed and love songs sung,
beneath the mantle of this cloak
I was deceived, I was deceived.
Just empty now, full of regret
in days of cloud and nights of chill,
but thoughts of vengeance warms my heart
I'll be avenged, I'll be avenged.
Author notes
My last Three poems incorporated the themes
Obsolete - http://allpoetry.com/poem/3699356
Deceit - http://allpoetry.com/poem/3730664
Revenge - http://allpoetry.com/poem/3797297
Form - Monotetra
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A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
1750 points, ended April 8, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent!
Ahhh I love this form.
Well done in this rounds contest. Congratulations on your wonderful trophy. An excellent poem. ~Pamela


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wow your wording is amazing and i love the formyou have used.its beautifully put togehter well done gran





