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The Road of Life

I am a lonely stranger
Walking on a wide road
The road of life
No one’s in sight
No one to assist
Just me
Alone…
On the road of life

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 15, 2008
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    short and good poem.
    Best wishes and good luck,


  • N e a r
    March 1, 2008
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    This really explains how life can be like... empty, alone, without anyone to help guide you or even just for company. It's sad and discouraging... All these feelings & more have been penned in this piece with a great flow. I like it. Thanks for sharing.


  • he broke me
    March 1, 2008

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    *sighs*

    best of luck in the contest... i dont know how many times i myself have felt like this and the truth is even if someone was there to help i dunno if i turn to them.