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Lights of Today

Gone to the depths
Seen the shadows
Overlooked the fact before
Never shuttering at any thought of bringing myself new life

Humanity overwhelming me with striking irony
Filling my cup with increasing amounts of past and confusion
Seeking for more answers for my delluted self
Drunk with lust and rage

Pacing the walls of this prison
Hoping to God I'll come to some sort of conclusion
Bottled up inside the emptiness of my soul
Clinging onto whats left of myself that is true

The clashing of bone and sinew
Leaving my ears to bleed
As I cry out in pain
Farfetched from any other that I have felt

Spinning around and about
Filling the air with my cancer sticks breath
Suffocating all those who breathe it
Trapped inside myself without communication

Forgiveness for the strong
And Judgement for the weak
All eyes watching, all eyes piercing
the hearts of many, the souls of those who are dead..

We await our destiny, our fate
Call it what you want, I'm no martyr
But all the same...I await it
To hopefully give me a purpose and peace of mind

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  • Ishillia
    March 1, 2008
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    "Drunk with lust and rage" - I absolutely love this line.

    "Forgiveness for the strong
    And Judgement for the weak" -Also another line that really caught my attention.

    Good write, Chris, as always.
    I still wish you would quit smoking.
    Keep in touch, I wonder how you are.


    • TragicallyInspired
      March 21, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment. I always appreciate them and more. Your basically the only one I ever talk to anymore and I dont get to often either so thats really hard. I hope you are doing well and for the most part I'm not so great on the quitting thing lets just say in under 30 minutes I smoked 14 cigarettes thats more than half in one pack..I think I'm on my way to somewhere I dont wnat to be but I guess its my fault for being that way. thank you for the comment though I always seem to have some joy to comfort me when you leave something like that
      -Chris