Destruction whispers faithfully within my hollow core-
Strength of life falters within barricades of resistance-
Memories of past faults become vivid-
Once placed under microscopic lenses of light.
Seeming to fade without command
Layers of paper like faith serve no purpose
In the midst of a gentle chaos I alone have created
While the pit of despair bleeds insight from its walls,
My conscience provides little assurance of safety-
Spearing my frozen heart,
The devil marks his territory.
Destruction whispers repeatedly within my minds thoughts.
Stepping in line, the tune of miserable bliss plays solely for me.
Seeming to fade without a word of apprehension
Petty thoughts of faith serve no purpose
When flying with their angelic wings is their intent.
…That has always been, their sole desire.
A contest entry
- Anything Free Verse by Blooming Poet.
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nice job. it didnt rhyme but you still made me like it. which was what i wanted. i will be rereading this and considering carefully. so good luck in my contest adn if you dont win dont be upset bcause your an amazing poet.
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The darkness and the subtle hints about the past and religion ..... I like this. I also like the style you used to write it.
Beautiful and dark.
I wish you luck.
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very beautiful. awesome. i liked it. it flowed very very well.
good luck!
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Tthe vivid emotions of the destruction going on here is stunning. great word choice and great overall feel. Beautifully penned
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So painful here, the death again inside you, the hell in every feelings, losing and falling apart...
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very well done and artistically put. love the last stanza.
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