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Bird Flew

to grave on borrowed wheel
our gravy thickened

and as genocide sureal congealed

culled sickened chicken 

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    Due to the large number of entries, I won't be commenting on each piece but will certainly be reading and rereading them all. I wanted to thank you for your entry here, I hope to have the contest judged fairly soon...


    al


  • Floorboards
    March 2, 2008
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    Hehehe, brilliant!


  • Swan song gold member
    March 1, 2008
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    Culled sickened chickens Dude that was just too good!!!! Good luck Amazing write!


  • zochit2me gold member
    March 1, 2008

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    Deep...
    Head scratching poem

    Becky