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Can You Really See?

Look into my eyes and see,
i am not what i apear to be
look closely and see
that deep inside
i want nothing more
then to just be free.
How much can you really see
when you look into these eyes?
can you truly see the hate..
the hurt....
or whats truly killing deep inside my mind?

When i looked into your eyes
i thought i saw what was there
when i looked into your eyes
i wanted to ask
but i didnt dare.

Deep inside my soul
i cower from
the wreckage and the waste
that wont let me leave
this lonely
and twisted place.

what do you see when you look
within our eyes
do you truly see
whats keeping us
from our only dream?

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  • AngelEyes13
    March 3, 2008

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    Wow, absolutly love this poem. This is how I feel a lot of the time:
    "Deep inside my soul
    i cower from
    the wreckage and the waste
    that wont let me leave
    this lonely
    and twisted place."
    Thank you soo much for entering my contest.