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over analyzing

i know this.

something so good
will inevitably turn bad
i know the ending
and it's incredably sad


do you know?

the way that i feel
when i'm thinking of you
when i picture us
i don't believe you do


i'm trying to tell you!

these aren't just rhymes
if you'd please open your heart
you'd know i'm there
i've been there from the start


why are you crying?

all of this is so very unfair
because you don't see me at all
if you did it would be apparent
i'm just waiting for you to call


catch the hint.

try not to get caught up
disecting your jumbled thoughts within
it's as simple as breathing
you just have to take it in


it's obvious.


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  • found
    March 2, 2008
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    well regardless, i really like it.

  • found
    March 2, 2008
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    so was this before yesterday?