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But you promised (still working on it)

You left me on a cold October night,
And though I knew you would be back
Nothing could ever seem right.

That night you gave me your farewell as we kissed
Holding me close I felt your heart beat
You told me I'll be remembered and always missed.

You're going off to a third world war,
I'm scared and filled with fright;
For who knows what may come
On another blood lust night.



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  • cutekitten789
    March 10, 2008

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    slightly gorey...but tasteful...i love the last line..it truely makes you fear the same things you fear... good job