Is valued
like gold
holding me
and troubles
I plant
one by one
into troubled holes
A contest entry
- The Red Wheelbarrow by AJ Morelli.
1500 points, ended March 17, 2008, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i think you do a great job showing the immense value of the garden bench, and don't need to tell us as well, especially not with the worn-out comparison to gold. i do very much like imagining "troubles / I plant / one by one" though, a great image, nicely described.
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Due to the large number of entries, I won't be commenting on each piece but will certainly be reading and rereading them all. I wanted to thank you for your entry here, I hope to have the contest judged fairly soon...
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Any place one can
re-dervert thir probles to is like being in heaven...mac -
Beautiful imagery created by the scene of the gardener on the bench planting "troubles" Nicely done and best of luck in the contest.
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Ok great job write on!
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