Look at Me !
W. Peter Sanci
Hey what are you looking at ?
I feel like shouting right out loud at times.
Just because I look different to you doesn’t mean I’m not there.
I have Parkinson’s Disease didn’t you
Know ?
That’s the reason for my blank stare, not that I don’t care.
That’s the reason my hands tremble and shake.
Not that I’ve had to much to drink.
When you see the drool come down my mouth,
It’s not because I want to, believe me.
When you see me stumbling down the street it’s because I have lost my balance.
Living with Parkinson’s Disease is not fun.
Every day you wake up you have a new reality to face.
Another part of 55you’re body mot working again.
It goes on and on.
Some days are like diamonds and some days are like stone.
So the next time you want to stare at something , pick a spot on the wall.
A contest entry
- Please Look at Me! by Sorath.
600 points, ended March 8, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you have 2 days till you die.... you need to add something into your authors notes. Everyone has to do it sorry
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Please re-read rules. I'll give you until sundown...Lol no you have 2 days.
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Sorath !
Pleas be more direct ! I don't have a clue as to what you are talking about. If you want to you can e mail me at wsanci@sympatico.ca. -
Sorath !
Hi ! I have two days to what ?
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A very powerful write. People can be cruel in society. They see something different, and they don't know how to handle it. This is a great write. Good luck in the contest.
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Kellie Marie !
WWhy thanks do much for you're very kind words about my poem. I apprecite them so very much. More than you'll ever know.
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Another Graat One !
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