A strong back carried many
silent burdens
denying denials, depleting time
underneath the smell of soil
2/29/08
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A contest entry
- The Red Wheelbarrow by AJ Morelli.
1500 points, ended March 17, 2008, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Don't throw rocks at glass houses unless you can run real fast
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oh i have been here before
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ah yes i remember the picture from this contest - a good piece that fits the imagery well i think. hard work, something i am averse to
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Due to the large number of entries, I won't be commenting on each piece but will certainly be reading and rereading them all. I wanted to thank you for your entry here, I hope to have the contest judged fairly soon...
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and these days, not many need that strong back for they are averse to good old hard work, a good poem
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wow...this is amazing! this has so many possibilites for interpretation...so much depth and heart..i love love this...could smell the earth....so freakin wonderful!!
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awesome!
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alot said in so little words...love it especially the first two lines...good luck in the contest.
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Love this personification. Really beautiful work with the prompt.
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A wonderful write. You did a great job with this piece. I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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