I cut a hole into nothing,
And for a while I feel ok.
I cut a hole into nothing
Some of the pain goes away
I cut a hole into nothing
It’s about the seventh one today
You’ve been gone for so long now
The day lost its wonders
My life is one long day that never ends.
I am given so many things to mend
They never work; I’ve nothing to do but…
Cut a hole into nothing,
And for a while I feel ok.
Cut a hole into nothing
Some of the pain goes away
Cut a hole into nothing
It’s about the eleventh one today
Now, that you’re gone I am left out
You made this choose
But I seam to be the only one that suffers
Since you did that I am NOTHING
I am all empty and they say their proud of me
So I cut into nothing
All the pain goes away
I cut into nothing
And be for it gets dark, I here you say “I’ll be the last one tonight.”
Author notes
i do not realy cut, it just poped into my head one day..
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A contest entry
- Make me feel again by lilblueeyesmine1978.
300 points, ended March 23, 2008, 62 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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This has so much emotion. I loved it. Thanks for entering it into my contest an I wish you the best iof lucck.
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aww powerful piece of writing, such raw emotion I can relate to. One of the best heartfelt poems I have ever read. The bit that really stood out to me is
"I cut a hole into nothing,
And for a while I feel ok.
I cut a hole into nothing
Some of the pain goes away"
take carex
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very very good i liked it bravo!!!
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So otuching and heartfelt here, the true meaning of our pain, it's like a hole like you said here, a place where we're always falling in...
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