a place of
peace
the old fish
pond
laced with water
lily
birds drink and
bathe
where i shall
gaze
A contest entry
- The Red Wheelbarrow by AJ Morelli.
1500 points, ended March 17, 2008, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Due to the large number of entries, I won't be commenting on each piece but will certainly be reading and rereading them all. I wanted to thank you for your entry here, I hope to have the contest judged fairly soon...
al -
quite sweet really, even though it's so short.
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I can see the beautiful serene place through your wonderful words. You've done a great job. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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