what sunlight creates
bamboo stalks grow straight
up toward eternity
green remembered
thrusts at revered Brahma
leafy heavens respect
A contest entry
- The Red Wheelbarrow by AJ Morelli.
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what sunlight creates
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Due to the large number of entries, I won't be commenting on each piece but will certainly be reading and rereading them all. I wanted to thank you for your entry here, I hope to have the contest judged fairly soon...
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Ohhh. Great picture, I could imagien the bamboo here. Great use of such a few words. You penned this beautifully and I thank you for that. Fav lines: leafy heavens respect
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ah nirvana - sometimes for me it is hagen-daaz sometime a blue sky much thanks for the read/comments glad this was of interest to you regards zaj
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Very Beautifully Said
You've said the truth more beautifully with your words... simple words have the depths of oceans... with few words you've spoken... of the bliss sunlights brings...making earth a blessed home for everyone
... thanks for sharing your thoughts... good luck in the contest... take care Minoo
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much thanks for your read/too-kind comments regards zaj
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"what sunlight creates"
Indeed. Flowers need light in order to thrive & bloom. Seeds must be scattered before the rainfall. Profound & inspiring. Good luck in Al's contest. Be well, Poet. Wanda
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yes 'nature' is quite amazing now we 'find-out' that virus' are responsible for snowflakes much thanks for the read/kind thoughts regards zaj
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There is so much more that sunlight creates, my only thought while reading this poem was "go on..."
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thanks for your read/comments zaj
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"bamboo stalks grow straight
up toward eternity..."
Very well written indeed! Good luck in the contest!
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much thanks for the read/your good wishes regards zaj
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