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the doorknob

Solid and brass,
lacking in significance,
until it's gone.

A contest entry

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  • pine-needles
    March 17, 2008

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    heh! clever! having been locked in a bathroom once for an hour because the doorknob fell off, i can attest that this is certainly true. so many things we take for granted except when they are missing or hurt.
    concise and witty.


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    Due to the large number of entries, I won't be commenting on each piece but will certainly be reading and rereading them all. I wanted to thank you for your entry here, I hope to have the contest judged fairly soon...


    al


  • gaiascully
    March 12, 2008

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    great

    oh AWESOME ending!!!! love it, thats so great!
    really gives you the idea without having to say much of anything, I had to comment, this is neat, keep it up.
    all of my best wishes to you
    >>>>gaiascully<<<<


  • Hoosierpoet silver member
    March 10, 2008

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    Almost a Haiku - but a lot said in just a few words. Good job, and best wishes for the contest.

    Moses


  • BellaD
    February 29, 2008

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    Oh, yes! We don't know what we've got til it's gone...opportunities that are closed off. Well done and good luck in the contest.


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 29, 2008

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    I do like this short poem - sure presents an image of a door with no nob - cannot open or close it properly.

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