Round and Plump
Green illuminates
Polished smooth
stomach awaits
Devouring
Sweet
and
Sour
Fulfilling my needs.
A contest entry
- The Red Wheelbarrow by AJ Morelli.
1500 points, ended March 17, 2008, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Due to the large number of entries, I won't be commenting on each piece but will certainly be reading and rereading them all. I wanted to thank you for your entry here, I hope to have the contest judged fairly soon...
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I'm not sure - could be apples or grapes. Sweet and mouth-watering, whatever it is! Good job and good luck in the contest.
Moses
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Very nice oh talented daughter of mine.
Love,
your AP daddy
mj.
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Sounds like a granny smith apple to me! Nice job on this and best of luck in the contest.
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lol. yeppers. and thanks, you too! =)
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i can't wait to see what'S this poem is going to be about
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