"What. The. Crap." The words stumbled out of Chris's mouth before he could think. "Uh--I mean...uh..."
"No, no, that's fine. I know it sounds odd, but I think I've got it all figured out," said Condra.
Daisy just stared at both of them blankly. Apparently, this plan of Condra's was too much to take in.
Condra caught sight of her mother's expression and became worried.
"Mom...? Are-are you ok?"
Daisy continued to stare straight ahead. Then, out of nowhere, she burst out laughing. She was laughing hysterically; so hard, she was crying and could hardly catch her breath.
"Mom? MOM?!" Condra yelled over the insane laughter. "What's so funny?"
"Th-tha-that y-you actu-u-ally think this-is is gonna work!!" and she laughed harder...if that was even possible.
"Just-just trust me mom. Ok?"
And so the plan was set in action.
Author notes
PSYCH! Gotcha didn't I? You thought it was gonna be like, what, a page or two long, right? You thought you'd find out what Condra's plan is, right? You were WRONG. lol Ok, you just have to wait a while. I'm having writer's block, but then I remembered that I had said I'd have Part 14 up a LONG time ago...but I didn't. lol Oh well! HA HA!
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The author used superb imagery and gentle words to bring her feelings to the page and into our hearts. This is a beautiful story, laid out well, described with feeling and written with the heart and imagination. Your word choices define what you wish to capture and you convey these emotions well to the reader.
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