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Rebirth

My tears dried on the pillow
My body lifted itself up
My chin stood strong on my neck
My breath blew out the black ink
The mascara ran up into my eyelashes
I blinked.
The colour returned to my skin
The bones clicked into place
My veins blue streams,
My blood filled with red hearts
The mould dropped off of my skin
My life begins.

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  • AmethystRose
    March 20, 2008

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    aww catie its good to see you still write
    cuz yr rly good, always have been
    i love this, its really different
    hope yr okay xxx

  • dark lotus52
    February 29, 2008
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    Crazy intense i like how you ran everything together. I also love the ressurection part. very good


  • Kelli Marie
    February 29, 2008

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    This is a unique write. I am not sure if you were ressurrected, or what. I enjoyed the read though>.
    Kelli