The accident happened all so fast,
And for two weeks the hell stayed & last,
And then I got the phone call,
That changed it all,
That...
You are no longer with me.
The pain of having to lose you so,
To experience the loss of letting you go,
And each day as it goes by,
I want to reach my hand into the sky & fly...
For You are no longer with me.
And now I'm left here with my tears,
and my fears,
Your soul is now in heaven running free,
for now I see,
For You are no longer with me.
At least not on this earth,
But You were blessed since the day of your birth,
When I was sad,
You were the one that made me glad,
And now I'm sad...
For You are no longer with me.
I adored you & you adored me,
And Our Friendship was meant to be,
We had our walks,
And our daily talks,
The days passed by,
And now I sigh,
For you are no longer with me.
Author notes
This is one of my earlier poems that I wrote back in June. I wrote this in my diary when I was missing Vicki... It isn't as good as the poetic form I used now but I wanted to share this with you guys.
Written November 28th, 2003
In a list
What did you think
Comments
-
oh that was so sad and really touching. it made me think of how i would feel if i lost my best friend. because there was a part in your poem that referred to going on walks together, and my friend and i always just go around walking at the parks, and just talking, and i really would be lost without her. i just can't even begin to imagine how it must have felt for you to lose a friend. losing anyone is hard, and i fortunatley haven't had to lose anyone close to me, and for that i know that i am blessed, and it makes me appreciate all the people that i have in my life. this was great, and i'm glad that you shared the experience with us. Christina
-
This is really a beautiful poem hon. I am so sorry I haven't been on the last few days. It has been crazy here. The love you have for your friend will never end, even though she has passed on. She will always be in your heart. A loving tribute to Vicki.
Much love to ya!!
~~Mary Anne~~
-
Another great poem. I really like this one. I can relate to everything I've read of yours so far, maybe that's why I like it so much.
Anyway. Very well written. You can make your poems rhyme very easily, I can't. Oh well.....keep it up!
xxx mistry (anti-pink ) xxx
-
Well done
I just got back from a walk and I may go on another walk tonight. I am about to make enchilladas. However, it sure would have been nice to have someone who'd like to walk at the mall and look at christmas decorations...have some tea and salad at a sidewalk cafe bistro like my mom and I used to. Oh well...I guess Tigger will have to do... He's in trouble though for pulling me as the whole idea was I was taking him on a walk and not the other way around. He has Neanderthal dog attacks. I know what you mean for as you miss Megan, Vicki and your dad I miss my mom and dad and grandmother immensely.
Adding your comment:
