Lavender dreams
plant illusions nightmares.
Consecrations endeavor
haunts eternal roads.
Masking torment
as sticky sweet desires.
Invading reality
covered in demonic deception.
Possessions horror
lurks in darkened halls.
forever stalked...
A contest entry
- ... by individuality.
600 points, ended March 1, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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We choose or not those that enter our lives, some are choices grand, some are those demonic. Sometimes they choose us. IS sad to feel threatened and unable to live life free of thr fear that a lurker may strike from the shadows at any moment.
Wonderfully written and congratulations on the HM.
Mouser
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wow! Sis you did a wonderful job speaking for our beautiful lavender love...such wonderful metaphor of sad reality and truth...this is excellent...and deeply haunting with the closing...sad when stalking is mistaken for love...
Thank you for speaking out for her and so many others...
Love,
sis
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This is a truly exceptional poem. Well done What a joy to read.
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I love "lavender dreams plant illusions nightmares"...great piece here with good dark metaphors...very well done.
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wow the imagery in this is so effectlivly weaved with such darkness in it.well done with this piece sweetie
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some good dark imagery here penned - ah reality, it is forever being attacked
thank you for taking the time to enter and good luck.
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