A dozen roses by the door
A special gift left on the floor
A token of a fond amour
To leave your lover
A box of chocolates late at night
A secret message out of sight
A kiss when turning out the light
All for your lover
A hope of love that lasts so long
A heart that bursts with splendid song
A knowledge you can do no wrong
You're with your lover
A life that's lived without despair
A love that grows the more you care
A need more deep than food or air
You have a lover
A dream that this is all there'll be
A truth in everything you see
A single being you and me
I am your lover
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Like your triplets Jeff babes-can you buy waistcoats with them on?
Seriously-this is very classy. xxx
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I likey.
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To be the lady of your dreams
And read about your thoughts and schemes
Everything's not as it seems
I'm still waiting
I know you are the sweetest man
You tell me that you have a plan
On love you'll never put a ban
I'm right here waiting
The roses and the chocs were nice
Even brandy served on ice
It's you, I want a bigger slice
I'm always waiting
When you stand outside my door
You and I both know the score
Just stay for a little more
No more waiting
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do you really know jeff? I do he introduced me to my husband! silly man he could have had me himself! if you do that sounds like fun! my real name is jill has he ever mentioned me and peter?
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My Master introduced us one evening, and although I would love to be the object of his affections, the above poem is purely my thoughts.
No, your name didn't crop up during the evening although we did talk about many things, but the evening was over all to soon.
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Nice. Here's another simple thought you have nailed simply. What more can a reader ask?
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Sighhhhhh....
Sometimes I wonder where all the roses went and then I find someone like you! Wonderfully written, simply elegante'..
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It is the simple things that say the most, and this poem says it all. Simple, elegant, breathtaking and beautiful all in one. There are simply no more words than those.
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So food is never on your shopping list either.lol This was good, my favorite part was:
A love that grows the more you care
A need more deep than food or air
Is there a name for this type of form? Just starting to learn them, or is this made up by you? -
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they are called triplets, and are known reasonably well. I adore them and perhaps yuse them more than most people round here, but lots of others do them too.
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Well indeed this was a very sweet piece you penned . Hmm when can I expect the roses??? Wonderful thoughts you penned.
LS
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does everyone want all jeffs poems we all do her but half of them are for one of us
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LOL I just love him...roses???I would love so much more...there's one who thinks she can have him but she won't. So what do you think we will get?? You have my attention....hmm.
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everyone loves him
he wears waistcoats whistles
kisses your hand when he says hello
treats you like a lady when you are naked or not
but pretends he will break the rules
loves it when we do
gives everyone a present for christmas and sweets othertimes
and kisses like a dream but I shouldnt know that
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Mmm, so youo have kissed him??? I would be jealous but you know,its alright. Nothing wrong with spreading some love now is it??
Breaking rules, is my middle name.
Thanks so much for the little info...
Be well my dear
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Come to think of it, he even treats ME like a lady.
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oooooOOOOOooooo
are they for me?
you bring us all choclotes but I want roses too she hasn't seen it yet
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