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Cutting Progression

My eyes are dry
I cannot cry
I cut myself
Just to get by

It's not okay
But it's my pain
The red tears
The bloody rain

Wounds once red
Now fade away
Like sun fades
At end of day

I wish to bleed the pain away
To keep the salty tears at bay

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  • emo-suicide13
    November 1
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    this is just trully amazing!


  • Brit-Girl
    July 19, 2008
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    this is beautiful

    it's so real and raw, I love it. thank you for writing

  • urmom135
    April 27, 2008
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    loved this one!
    it's the best!
    <3 ~Eva~


  • InMyFlames
    March 8, 2008

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    whoa so true im really feeling this piece its awesome!! i can mostly relate to these lines
    "My eyes are dry
    I cannot cry
    I cut myself
    Just to get by" great work


  • jessica14
    March 1, 2008
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    wow i feel this pain me myself cut

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