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Kids In Love

Remember those two stupid kids
They believed in miracles sometimes
Life was hell and living was sublime
Began with a dirt road and plenty of foes
But those two kept walking
He saw the future and she ran from it

Conversations those two had
Can you imagine
The future she feared was already near
And he stood there arms outstretched
Now it's exactly opposite

We were kids in love once,
I remember because you wouldn't let me forget,
And all of time stopped at night
We laughed and laughed and smiled,
But we were just kids
Young ass kids
Just kids
But it's always the same
Our time's still spinning

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  • ckwriter69
    March 1, 2008

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    Good reflection write April. Yes those times when we were just kids seemed at the time to be the most important thing in the world. But yet we cling to those feeling and they become a part of us, and we learn from them and move on wiser and more understanding. Thanks for sharing and never stop writing.