We sparkle like the crimson sun,
it's obvious that she and I are one,
blazing passions glowing bright,
dancing about bestowing light,
I feel her sweet warmth upon my face,
as she lures me to her lethal embrace,
igniting desires with our blazing dance,
we are the truest inspiration for lovers' romance.
Author notes
contest 2 option 1."Glow in the dark nail polish","I'm a little teapot, short and green",and "I have read the rules, understand, and agree to abide by them."
A contest entry
- EVERY OPTION KNOWN TO MANKIND!!! TAKE A LOOK! by Salig Flicka.
735 points, ended March 30, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Constructive critism not insults!
Comments
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I strongly believe you meant option 2, because this sounds nothing like water. Anywho, I think this is absolutely wonderful! You had my interest completely captured from beginning to end! I barely noticed the rhyme, which was excellent, and keep rereading it! My favorite line is definitely the last, "we are the truest inspiration for lovers' romance." I LOVE it! Wonderful work, and best of luck!
~Avan~
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A very nice write you have penned here. Very well done. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck
Kelli
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