AS I AWAIT
EVER SO PATIENTLY
IN THE DEPTS OF THE NIGHT
AWAITING FOR MY
PREY TO ARRIVE
INTO MY DOMAIN
I BEGAN DEBATING
ON HOW THEY SHOULD DIE
SHOULD I ALLOW THEM
TO HEAR MY SICK AND TWISTED LAUGH
AS I BEGIN TO SAW THEIR LIMBS
OR SHOULD I LET THEM
SEE MY UNCARING FACE
AS I GOUGE OUT THEIR EYES
WITH THEIR OWN FINGERS
A contest entry
- so..how about the bronze winners now? by Cat10.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - GORE ME... by Super-GOREgous.
570 points, ended June 4, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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As you already know i did REALLY like this cause i already commented but its not Gorey as i want though
im sure you have others
TY for entering -GOREgous GORE
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thank you for entering. this is extremely dark and gory. a very nice write, you did a good job. but as the rules state, you must have a bronze trophy, if you did win one, can you send me the link to it so I can prove you had one. thanks!
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ohhhhhh!
dam tell me more.....all this GORE is so turning me ONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!.....
really though you should keep on with the GORE...
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