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The Phoenix

The hot wind kisses every section
Of my slightly sullied skin
Bathing me with insurrection
Cleansing me of my old sin

For those that seek to sulk in sorrow
Unleash the wings against the hurt
Rising up to new potential
Live in light and leave the dirt

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NeuteredBuddah

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  • innocent tears
    March 14, 2008
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    like it alot

  • purplechaos
    February 29, 2008
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    I do belive you wow me everytime. Oh if we could all be like the pheonix and resurect ourselves!