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Mental Midget

mental midget put down that sword
it is much too heavy for you
you swing you miss causing such discord
with your insignificant point of view

they say small things amuse small minds
and that you get what you deserve
in My pinkie I have more brains combined*grins*
than you and all that you serve

here you go let Me help you..
you cannot fight what you dont understand
it is very easy I am see-through
I do what I do because I can

I dont need you because you dont make Me
I dont need you because you mean not
I dont need you because you are needy
now piss or get off the pot

stands up the mental midget
hands it a pen to replace the sword
I guess this is known as kismet
and lets face it far more than you can afford

easy now you'll be alright
One day you will have insight too...
no need to freak out and cause a fight..
I say this because I feel for you

A contest entry

I just wonder why one would care so much in anothers opinion do read this and take solice that they are only an influence in your life if you allow them to be.

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  • natchstucco
    March 14, 2008
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    well in truth we all are asking to be accepted in some way or another. even you just by entereing this contest. I love the script but we must admit to ourself's that no one is an island and yes we do want to get recognized. One does have to have a thick skin to live and get ahead . I agree , just move on to the next one....


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    March 13, 2008

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    I can take not winning contests, for sure. That is not the issue..it is the fairness in the judging that is the concern to all that have entered this contest. People really take the time to write and their work is important to them. Im one of those that really dont care, but not everyone is the same..and to those people it is hurtful.
    I hope they read this and know that people do understand.
    Soulful Woman

  • Liquid memories
    March 1, 2008

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    very true words. but many of us are affected by words of others. never immune to thoughts and expressions ohters make and say. thank you for sharing.