It says anonymous but then you ask who we are
and in the end when you judge
you choose the winners for who they are
not for what they wrote
If you can not judge fairly
by reading what we write
and all you want are those you know
I shall lay down my pen
for it is not worth my time
to show you what I have
when all you look for are people you know
and not for wonderful writes
I must say I'm guilty of asking who you are
but not to judge on who I know
but so that things are fair
and not one person get all the credit
when others are just as grand
but for those who judge on who they know
I will not pen a beautiful write
for you do not care a wit
all you want is to see writes from those you know
while wasting all our time.
A contest entry
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700 points, ended March 14, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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Little repetative for my liking. I got the point . this could of been better if it was not as repetitive as you have written it.
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Me thinks you might’ve hit a nerve here
judging by no responses
AND YOU POSTING THIS TWO DAYS AGO
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Well if I hit a nerve with anyone then maybe some will think about asking for usernames when holding contests, and stop judging on who they know instead of how well written a piece is.
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