I don’t think this is a poem.
It has no flow structure
nor rhyme
In my fourteen years of life;
I might add.
The last year now
intensely involve in
expressing myself
through poetry.
I can honestly say.
You make no sense.
And for the record.
Just what is a prostate?
I have never heard of one,
or know of anyone with one.
Let alone, one not working!
What the heck are you taking about
and why write about it anyway.
My boyfriend Bobby,
who much older then me;
sixteen.
Says that you’re
a dope addict
or something icky like that!
Maybe even a sex pervert.
I’m sure someday someone
will like your so called poetry
as crazy as it is.
But please.
Don’t enter anymore of my contest
You scare me.
Author notes
a review of a poem of mine
you know who you are...
A contest entry
- That's a comment? Contest by galfalfa.
525 points, ended March 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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All too true examples
Although i havent yet scared anyone 
thanks for this,
galfalfa
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Someone actually wrote this? Wow...ermm yes, speechless...wow. A perfect example for this contest. I am very familiar with the last line 'You scare me' I get that a lot
Excellent..have to say still speechless...best of luck 
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