Living life
through the pains
ignorance to actions
numb of it all
Looking out
into this world
realization hits
I'm missing me
Mirrors; Reflections
revealing my heart
knowing whats needed
clouded perspectives
Shattered apart
the lives we lived
so frozen and cold
isolation sets in
Across my window
your face peering out
love awoken
affections chained up
Tormented sorrows
loneliness dwells
love is hidden
within our eyes.
Author notes
contest.
prompt:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pTQ39EDVr1s
A contest entry
- Musical Musings by Improv Machinery.
1150 points, ended April 11, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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and you said this was crap. what the hell are you smoking? can i have some? lol j/k ive been clean and sober for 6 months now. i love the images that you bring to life with this write. i really like the fourth stanza. ive had many days where i have felt like that. great write hun, never stop.
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i dont know...did it really do the video/music any justice though..sigh. lol
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