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Invisible Hope

You hear his beat but can't see his heart
He grabs your hands you feel too far
You kiss his lips but don't hear his words
He opens his arms you think of birds
You move in closer to feel his touch
He's held you this whole time but it's not enough

Sweat beads form you become so tense so scared
Listen to his heart if you doubt that its there
Caress his fingertips if you can't feel his hand
He loves you its there you need to understand
Fly to his chest when his arms invite you in
Reassure your heart that he loves you again

Sometimes you can feel what you can't see
Sometimes you will hear when he can't speak
Sometimes you will listen but not with your ears
Trust in your heart and it will demolish your fears

Welcome to the winners circle because you know you have won
Sometimes the most romantic things are what is not said or done

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 29, 2008
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    Just beautiful hun!!!! Sometimes words are not needed, if you can truly feel someone's heart...

    I'm bookmarking this one for sure to remind me what's really important in a relationship... for the times when the right words won't come.

    Just fantastic!!!


  • A Lonely Soul
    February 29, 2008

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    Wow, I loved this poem! It was amazing and I feel so much better from reading it. It helped me a lot, and it's just a wonderful write. Thank you so much for entering my contest and keep up the writes.
    ~~Tori~~