I Can’t Say This In 13 Words So Fuck You Too.
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You should be writing for yourself
poetry is not
done it in 13 word or less
in dirty pretty (whatever the fuck that means)
rhyming only
don’t use commas
watch your cursing
don’t say retard nigger
bitch
twat fruitcake fag homo.
You should be writing for yourself.
Fuck what
My Shit Don’t Stink or Lady Dee Twat Cake (fake names here I hope)
think of your work!
Fuck what your mom dad lover
teacher grandfather aunt uncle
dog cat or bird thinks of your work!
You should be writing for yourself.
If you should be so stupid as to enter a contest
and not expect friends of those running the contest
to have the edge over you.
I got a bridge here I’d like to sell you.
If you expect anyone to fall to their proverbial knees
kiss your ass, King you poet of the year best I’ve ever read.
You’re as fucked up as those that are running the contest.
Now:
Go to the bathroom and look in the mirror.
That jerk off looking back at you.
That's who I'm talking about here ...........
Author notes
(R rated) poor judgment use in poem
lots of cursing
A contest entry
- Tell the judges what u think...click here and enter! by natchstucco.
700 points, ended March 14, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Seems like an exerpt of buncha wordage swearing together. but no, there is some rythmn going on here and yes the point is well documented with all those fuckin' rules that some 11 yr old personality got from her teacher at school.
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you're my new hero.
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I think you said it brilliantly!!!!
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LMAO!!!
i was laughing so hard i almost pissed myself...i love this and i know exactly what you are saying...i wont write for anyone but me...those stupid contests dont mean anything...well it was great...GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST!!!! -
weklkl now my friend, your point is well made. rifght on good job of sharing your felings.
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