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I Can

I can see it
I can feel it
I can hear it

It's coming
In the dead
Of night

It's creeping
Up onto us
Behind us

I can see it
I can feel it
I can hear it

You won't like it
I don't like it
It's too scary

Leace us alone
Leace us be
Go back to where
you belong!

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  • N e a r
    February 29, 2008

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    Ooh, I like this a lot! :D The pressure is haunting... and very chilling. Almost like a horror movie being played out. Great job with heightening the intensity and fear with every line & stanza!