My god, my god
Do you have one too?
As I squint and strain
Through the spraying blood
Of the gaping neck
Peering deep
Into your cavernous meat cave
My fingers twitch nervously on the scalp
Of this dislodged head
Stop twitching!
I can’t focus as my dilating pupils concentrate
Ahhh! I can’t take it!
As I pry and stretch your neck
And dive into your cavity
Splinters of bone lodge in my skin
And I am saturated in red
Plundering wildly
I frantically fling organs about
As they sickly squash on the tile
Whilst your headless figure
Continues to retaliate
It’s got to be here somewhere…
THERE!
Viciously clawed
Like a rag being torn
The fibers shred away and snap
As in a brilliant cascade of motion
And blood
I spring free with the heart
And the body collapses
With a thick thud
Raspy, almost giggly breaths
Escape as I look at my trophy
Another soul released
From this cesspool culprit
That still contracts in my hand
In my peripheral
I see a couple of severed heads
Wobbling violently
Like a punctured worm
Trying to wither away
Don’t strain little ones
Your redemption is nigh
With a burping squish
I crush the mangled mass
Who needs one of these anyways?
Exhilarating gasps
And liquid forms on my eyelids
In the betrayed silence
I hear the unsure throbs
As the last one realizes
That is totally alone
And the next one to go
Inhaling deeply
Nails dig into the fleshly crust
Of this cursed chest
My turn to be free…
Author notes
He would have been called 'The Heartbreak Kid' Enjoy.
A contest entry
- Serial Killers by Tattboyspet.
425 points, ended March 6, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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dqed
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YAY!!
THIS IS HOT AS FUCK!!!!!!!! AMAZING my friend, truly amazing. Kudos
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You have allowed the darkness to shine through in this one and I enjoyed it thoroughly - thank you for your entry
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Chilling read...awesome imagery. Nicely done, love the gruesome pieces, deeply dark and twisted. Best of luck in the contest
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omg hun!u crazy ass!lol.jk.lovz
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lol, well she wanted gory and different so i had to cater to the needs!
thanks for reading even if it wasn't in your taste
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