The door that stepped outside of my vows
lead to many things
I wish I would have just stayed true
and saw what true love brings
back then I didn’t understand “I love you”
and how important it was to be
each other’s one and only
the past won’t change
Author notes
contest promt "what door do you wish you never opened?"
contest promt, Give Me Your Heart (collaborations contest)
~People (relationships/family/marriage/divorce/self/esteem)
A contest entry
- What door you wish you never opened? by rosepoet.
300 points, ended March 28, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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I like your take on the prompt- it's very unique
nice contemplative piece.
thanks for entering -
wow tht door does need to stay closed, good job my love.
christina
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nicely penned...so many doors to choose from, yet often we think that we're missing something better, so we step inside another, only to find that everything you needed was behind the door you closed.
Good luck in the contest
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Succinct. Nice write, thank you for entering best of luck!
DAMSELx -
This poem was grat. Showing the unspeakable truth, that the past will never change. We must accept that in order to live on. Great write!
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WOW
Love the first line -
I already know what you meant, But this is still a good write. Thanks for pointing me to it.
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Time is a great teacher....
Galaxy2
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wow this is truly said but sometimes to late to make a change I sure do know this can help me and many others. What a beautiful short write. poet
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awww, this is so sad, the feelings in this cannot surpass the years before without feelings like this. Any other partner reading this would be endeared to you for this
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