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My Love

So how will I tell the one how much i love her?
with endless eyes thick with beauty?
splashed with an array of dazzling stars,
with each detail so delicate and inspiring
that it speaks more than any poem, story or song.
No

By telling her that her laugh warms my heart?
it can take any pain away and cleanse me,
a lullaby that calms my mind
telling me life is worth living.
No

Whispering words of skin with endless youth?
saturated with stories of life,
kissable and seductive
luring me to you at any cost.
No

A person who I love, perfect in every way?
every part of your soul and being I love,
a person so precious to me I would die for
for whom I fear your end more than my own.
No

For words and numbers are limited
they cannot come close to your greatness,
such brilliance in every way
it would be an insult to say so,
if everything is a ruined image of a perfect object
you would be that perfect object.
how do you know when you have never met her?
because if it’s you it will be true.

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  • piccola silver member
    June 20, 2008
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    So lovely and romantic. Thank you for the great diversion. It was a pleasure to read.


  • NickelleteXninja
    June 18, 2008

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    Thats so cute..
    I wish a guy would tell me somehting like that


    I was listening to the perfect slow song for this too lol

    thanks for entering
    seeing that someone thinks like that made me smile


  • willowprincess
    May 23, 2008
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    so so cute and sweet. good job with this. this girl is lucky to have someone so sweet.


  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    March 19, 2008

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    This was great. How do you tell someone that you love them? WITH YOUR HEART!!! This was wonderfully written. thanks for sharing and I wish you good luck in love and in life.


  • Pureisolation
    March 3, 2008

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    wonderful poem i really liked it alot. I could really tell that you look highly at someone and i think that is wonderful that you have experienced love like this. wonderful poem though.

  • The Inc
    March 2, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry; however, I'm not looking for Love poems in this contest.

    ~The INC."


  • Athronofaredrose
    March 1, 2008
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    great poem

    keep up the great work


  • iseesmallpeople
    February 29, 2008
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    i love it

    this is worth ..its weight in gold.....easy to get the image .....i enjoyed it so much........sadly i met a girl that did the same for me .....but because of her parents regard to me....it will never happen ...........this was perfection at its best.....keep writing please

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