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Alone

Alone,
      me,
        myself,
                I.
Under
    a
      lonely
            sky.
Nowhere
      me,
          nothing
                I.
I'm
  alone
        all
          the
              time.
Alone,
      wandering,
                asking
                      why?

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  • tellnotalesxx
    May 18, 2008
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    siimple but awesome at the same time
    *mel claps*


  • XScreamMeALoveSongx
    March 1, 2008
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    awesome hun
    xxxxx


  • N e a r
    February 29, 2008
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    The like the style this poem was written it... It even gives off a vibe of solitude and loneliness... also, it seems to be streaming downward. It adds some great effect. Love this poem.. unique and pretty cool. Thanks for sharing!