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Bathing Restraint

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Water rushing
cleaning hell
Paralyzed

head to tail

seeing him

naked male.

 

 

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13 words.
pic credit:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/81984593@N00/1797480650/

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  • Sarah957
    March 24, 2008

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    I laughed out loud at "seeing him, naked male" It shocked me and I like that. Like seeing the naked guy is all part of the torture! This one is a keeper, great write.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    Congrats on all the shinys!

    Aww this is adorable, such a cute pic. And a wonderful poem. All the best in the contest with it


  • Desire gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Bathing Restraint
    This piece had me in rolling
    What trauma ...seeing a naked male bent over
    Oh Surprise-Surprise!!!

    I almost had my drink shoot out my nose~
    cleaning hell
    Paralyzed
    head to tail


    I Appreciate the time You took to bring forth
    a HUGE smile to my face
    Thank You for sharing Your Humor also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • SpiceRack
    March 3, 2008
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    Bhahaha.
    Good luck in the contest! :]


  • takemypainaway
    March 3, 2008

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    awww...

    funny funny

    that poor clean kitty lol

    thank you so much for the entry

    --kat

    *


  • islekine gold member
    March 1, 2008
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    I love the picture! and the write!

    Thanks for entering!
    Write on and on!
    *PEACE*

  • Improv Machinery
    February 29, 2008

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    i still cant get enough of this picture. i showed it to a few of my buddies and they just about hit the floor laughing. you should do a pic inspired contest with all kinds of funny animal pictures sometime, i think it would be a big hit.


  • mommyof2
    February 29, 2008

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    lol too funny! Ya, would be quite an intimidating view from way down there...poor kitty. Cleverly witty...best of luck with this cute write! ~mommy

    btw, thanks for the comment


  • Simsboy
    February 29, 2008
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    cute, yet awesome. Keep up the good work steph

  • Improv Machinery
    February 29, 2008
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    dear lord. i couldnt help but laugh my hind end off when i read this. it seems as if you picked the thoughts right out of that poor little cat's head. that pic is simply hilarious. great job.
    Rob


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 29, 2008

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    I love the look on that feline. Hahahah. Very funny. Well done honey. Good look in the competition.

    Love
    Wayne
    Fx


  • peridotPixi
    February 29, 2008

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    cute

    i know seeing a naked male is bad enough let alone to be showering with one right, its funny, good luck on the contest, keep writing, -Amy


  • N e a r
    February 29, 2008

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    Wow, I didn't expect that ending "naked male". (lol) This is an awesome write, hun. I like your beginning with "Water rushing / cleaning hell / Paralyzed". Intense & vivid. Love it.

    • luna-midnight gold member
      February 29, 2008
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      why than you sooo much, took me so long to get my thoughts in 13 words, hahahaha...im a bit worried about then ending of help...sigh.lol..wanted to put please help, but then i's 14 words.lol

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