She is my greatest treasure
As far as I can measure
She is the height of pleasure
She said."I'll call you pinky."
And ate my pink-red flower
I think it's highly kinky
She called me "Utter flirty"
And sucked my flowing juices
I think it's somewhat dirty
She made me sweet as honey
She licked me hard all over
I feel it's rather funny
She made me rather sleepy
And ripped me off...all naked
I found her sweet but creepy
Her limbs were so curvacious!
She let me feel all over
She was so highly gracious!
Author notes
What a picture! I wish I could .... these soft and sweet buttocks!
A contest entry
- Erotic Challenge....Round 1 Picture Inspired...Come & get ur spot...Move onto the next round...Win big points along the journey of 3 Rounds....... by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
750 points, ended March 14, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Keep the ink flowing because you ahve defitely got it going!
~Donna~
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holly wowy
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holly wowy
sweet you!
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you are a brilliant writer! very open! you definitely don't hold anything back...which is a great thing! Keep it up! you have a talent for erotica. and again...thanks for the comment on my poem
I've never read anything like it! AMAZING!
The One and Only...
~Lynn Jones
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LynnJones
Yea, I usually keep my things open.
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what apen you have and an imagination to boot. Great job here Gal.
Keep it up
Love
PAssions
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PassionPromise
Thanks + Kisses
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Very sweet!
Such a sweet piece of poetry..very cute and well versed!! I have tried my hand at writing "erotic" but it never comes out quite right...lol Thanks for sharing!!
Shannon
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Closetpoet1971
I like to share 'anything'.
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Wow
So many things to say, it made me laugh it made me 'well' you know and it make me think, what a talent this girl is. Brill is all I can say and what's your number.
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cute too
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sexy slinky poem. nice. i've read your poems, and i am interested in why do you think you enjoy erotica so much? you are writing better and better on the subject of late. -silverfish
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silverfish
Thank you for the encouragement!
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this was cute
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Naughtygrlred
Thank you, sexy back girl!
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This was.... very entertaining to say the least
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Lexie
Tell me when you feel bored, honey! -
cherrysmile
Love what?
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LOVE THIS
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mmmmmmmmmm sure paints a picture
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juggalettebingy
Thanks for the mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm .
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You most certainly make your needs and desires known! A very passionate write!
Az
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azlyn
Now that you know my needs and desires, where shall we meet together, honey?
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very seductive poem well written take care
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angel-lover
I can't take care of myself when someone seduces me...
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Such a steamy interpretation of the image itself. Teasing the edges of of thought, provoking mind and flesh. You add such a unique sense of expression, that humor - that leaves an aroused yet contented feel. Nicely done!
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You're very gracious, my dear!
Thank you very much indeed!
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LOL, I found her sweet but creepy....My favourite part
Loved this one thanks for sharing
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Thnk you, sweet girl...
Can I lick tha tear coming out of your eye?
Galaxy2
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I like
I love your construct! The short snappy lines remind me of respiration during sex. The rhyme is quite crude but I love your description...pink-red flower I'll remember that one
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I wish I could see your sweet-scented perspiration at the time of action, honey!
Pink-red flower is a realistic description...lol
Thank you cutie for a ravishing comment!
Kisses...all over!
Galaxy2
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. . . what diabeticboy said.
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you use simple rhyme schemes yet it goes so well you are an amazing erotic poet if i do say so myself
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so nice
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thanks, my dear!
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Ohh! so hot! i love it. Give me MORE!
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I'll give MUCH MORE...till you scream, hottie!...Just ask for MORE!
Galaxy2
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i cant say any thang you gast say what i feel abut you hony kisssssssssssssssss
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I appreciate your feelings, cutie....
Kisses (Numer of letter s in you Kiss X 100)....
Galaxy2
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ohh this is hot. really really good. i liked this.
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I believe I'm hotter than my poems...lol
Hot kisses, my dear!
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i think the same to my poems
hot kisses back dahling
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a thought hon you did a nice job thanks for sharing
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You're such a sweetie! I can share anything with you....lol
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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well, I wrote a new Erotic poem...just for you darling. Cum read...
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I can do much more than mere reading....and I'll DO it, my love! Thank you very much indeed!
Kisses!
Gaslaxy2
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This is a VERY delicious peice.
loved the tasty imagery here.
Sensual sex at it's Best, I'd say.
E P H I P H A N Y
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A delicious remark by a delicious lady!...
means a lot to me..thank you and kissessss!...
It would have been sensual sex at its best only if it were about you, honey...lol
More kisses!
Galaxy2
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LOL oh honey your words alone made me want to touch myself. wow missy I really miss reading your work. So sexy and a little different then what I have been reading. Got to take a look at what brought these words to life. lol
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Why to touch just yourself, sweetie?..why not me too?...lol
Galaxy2
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really good and i like the way u said it it makes it sound sexy in a way
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Thank you...and btw you're sexy in many ways....
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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Very nice.So, I take it you like curves?*wink wink*
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Show me the curves...and find out how much I love them...lol
Kisses, honey!
Galaxy2
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bravo...
I like how it teases you with submission, then turns playful, I found it delightful! -
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Anyone who likes submission, loves to be played with and wants to be delighted, is most welcome!
Kisses, honey!
Galaxy2
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haha...well thank you. I'm sorry...that's how I write. Many of my poems come from somewhere...so I can't really write to be funny. I do have a poem about pot though. lol. Maybe I should post that. lol. Later..
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You say you can't write to be funny...What about having some 'fun'...Let me whisper something in your ear, my love!
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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I Loved This.
Thank you so much for reading my poetry and adding me to your fav's. I am guessing you are gay. I have two gay sons, and they both live in Chicago. I always march in the gay pride parade with them! I even had a photo taken of me between two drag queens, and made it into an X-mas card. It said, "Now we don our gay apparel!" This is hot and sexy and if I was gay, would really moisten my sweet tooth.
Shana
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So sweet of you, honey!...Good for you that you're not a gay..otherwise I could have been kinky with you....lol
Thanks for the comment and your time...You're so 'gracious', my love!
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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I can offer sweeter things....on demand....lol
Kisses!
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nice...I like it! Very Very good! Really sweet!
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lol that's great..
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Your sweet company may make me greater, honey!....lol
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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hey baby is this about me?
lol
KNIGHT TIME
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Yes...if you act likewise....try it!...lol
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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As far as I can measure,She is the height of pleasure. I love this line, very powerful. You still bring people into your words which feels like reality. Great write luv.
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I guess you're 'powerful' too!...lol
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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ah ha, nice.
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Which act is so nice, honey?
Galaxy2
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Haha...
And a blast of fresh oxygen you are indeed. -
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A lot of oxygen...yeas...but (reserved) just for girls, my dear!....lol
Galaxy2
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Another compelling write. I enjoyed reading this one as much as the others. Such a way with words. A very wonderful flow.
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I like to be flirtatious with words too...unfortunately...
Thanks for the valuable comment, dear!
Galaxy2
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Eros meets Dr Seuss
Sorry, not really my cup of tea - the humour and the eroticism don't quite gel for me.
But heh, the rhythm is perfect, the structure superb, and the rhyming easy on the brain.
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Another...
breath taking write. you certainly are a hot one. Ew!
Good luck in this contest.
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Personally I don't like to be 'breathtaking'. I'd prefer to act as oxyge,
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My 'hot' activities come under my 'privacy'...This is justthe reflection....lol
Thanks for good wishes!
Galaxy2
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SINsational..............
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I wanted it to be more SINsational yet my capasities for sinful activities is rather limited....lol
Thank you.
Galaxy
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Well written and versed ---excellent flow and easily read---Well Done and best of luck to you in the contest
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Thank you very much indeed, my dear!
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Thank you very much indeed, my dear!
Galaxy2
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good golly miss molly
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Your appreciation means a lot to me.
I'm grateful!
Galaxy2
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I have to say, its sort of not hitting the mark with me..having a weird/funny edge to it is taking away from the eroticness.
Rhyming is quite tight, well done
Thank you
Good luck
Cindy
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My 'lips' are somewhat tight
They need to be responsive
I want a friendly bite.
Thank you, honey!
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