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To Keep Her Attention

Another day in meow world
and I have to wonder
what does my master see in this thing
as she sluffs me aside
a quick pat on the head and a stroke cross my neck
im down again lookin up
oh what does my master see in this thing
its hot and its noisy
and a troubled device
seeking the hands
taking away from my time
yet it makes my master happy
I'll just keep being the first thing she sees each day
before her fingers start to play
damn this new bed is so hard
gonna get me a pillow
starting tonight!

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  • Kari gold member
    March 7, 2008
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    lol very good


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 1, 2008

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    JUST ADORABLE!!!!

    I read this first and then went to look at the picture and just laughed so hard You have a very cute take on the picture!'s


  • urehooked
    March 1, 2008
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    A lovely wee poem my friend. You keep coming up with them my friend. Superb. Kenny


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    February 29, 2008
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    Cute, and adorable. What a way to grab the attention. Thanks for entering and good luck!