Your early departure made many cry,
Now your an angel high in the sky.
Your love of art Was just a start,
A friendship now torn apart.
At least now your pain is gone,
Any consolation, not for this one.
The good you did and still had to do,
Why oh why did the Lord choose you.
Maybe he decided enough was enough,
That your workload was far too tough.
So for a sleep he lay you down,
On your head placed an Angels crown.
You are not now, or ever will be,
Just another memory.
Rest In Peace my friend.
A contest entry
- Make me burst out in tears with your words by KaseyL.
600 points, ended May 9, 2008, 84 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Awww. So sweet. That's all I can say, which I'm sorry for..but this is just so sweet.
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He would be very touched by your poem my friend. Thanks for sharing this beautiful write with us.
He is greatly missed. Best of luck in the contest.
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This is so personal and sad... yet it gives a nice ending with the descriptions of an Angels crown, especially. "Rest in peace" is a big factor in this one, because now they have no more strife and suffering in the world... Fantastic poem with a lot of depth & emotions... Thanks for sharing. *hug*
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o0o0o this is great, glad to see your writing all the best in the contest
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