Colours seem so obligatory
When all around nothing gets
connected ~ You see
Nothing seems to come
of those patterns. But
In other realms ~ In Future
The shape of things will
slot into place from
a youthful perception
Eyes like UFO's
EYE's matching
Violet bobs
The maths of two colours
was indescribably
difficult to win ~ For
What slot is this that
casts no shadow
When you flip
It's bumpy edges
make it difficult
To spin ~ insert
The chip in it's slot
You'll never win
Red or yellow
Author notes
This is from the competitions picture. A very abstract scribble that has been scanned into the computer, many writings some of them upside down, but mainly plastered with eyes with dilated pupils.
A contest entry
- DOODLES - WHERE DID THAT COME FROM? Picture Prompt - by swanridur.
700 points, ended March 11, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
By Robert Bridge
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Thankyou for entering my competition. I like this very much, it fits very well with my picture prompt as the whole seems disconnected and abstract in theme. I particulary like the last three stanzas. Well done Best Wishes :)
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Thamks swanridur
Had a feeling you'd like it.
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