Our love tarnished
by a past full of pain.
Always trying to seek trust
in each others eyes.
Our love distracted,
by Fears of the end.
Our love so solid,
yet brittle in its form,
enwraps me in joy,
traps me in sweet serenity.
Our love will overcome
Whatever comes our way…
Our love grows stronger
with each delicate kiss.
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A contest entry
- Short Love Poems by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 21, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Cute.
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thanks
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really good....beautifle...love it...your really good!!
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thanks
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thank you
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your welcome...you must really love to write...and u must have a lot of things to write about...
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thank you i do, but im going through the block at the momment, i cant find my voice lol
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i hope u find it soon!!
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Aw, lovely, love the ending! I could really feel this poem, it's as if you're the only two people in the world, so in love yet still insecure, knowing deep down that nothing can last forever, that's what I got anyway,
brilliant,
well done matey,
Alex.
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THANKS YOUR RIGHT ALEX, BUT IM GOING TO TRY MY HARDEST TO MAKE IT WORK !!!
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