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wind down

night night heartbeats
that's now
the evening twang
intertwined not with last words
but looking forward lexicon...
no slammed door exit of light switch

pillowed, dark that doesn't cover fully
or discourage hints, this
yet allows us to illuminate graciousness
to rest, not silhouette risk
even in wrist, gesture another
understanding by ear not blanketed
neither suffocated by brain,
a lullaby is why you don't feel old
nor too rebalanced

Author notes

good luck isn't impressively talked about; Isaiah 65:11

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  • Pollycheck
    February 29, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my why contest. This is a very interesting and different take on the prompt of why. Thank you for sharing.